What're you talking about when you say not catchy?
To me this is a great song! and I haven't listened to any other songs, so i can't tell whether or not you've made progress or not; but now I definitely want to check them out :] You succeeded in your mission to create an ambient/inspirational song, nuff said
This song has a lot of elements that i really like. It used a low saw/triangle sound to create a mellow feel (please correct me if I'm wrong) which I'm particularly fond of myself. Plus it used catchy percussion, which to me is very important in a song. Also, around halfway through the song there's a high-pitched guitar which is also very strong in conveying an inspirational setting.
Overall good job, I rated it a 9/10 because, like any song, it could still be improved.
Awesome :] I'll keep up with your songs :]