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Crystal Fragments Crystal Fragments

Rated 4 / 5 stars

The melody is very good but it's very shallow in the beginning, so shallow that I was about to back out and pick a new song to listen to before it mixed up a little and got catchy. I suggest putting in some new instruments to add a little flavor. Good song otherwise! :D

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NotBobRamen responds:

Thanks, will do.

Aspect - Depth Aspect - Depth

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

Quite interesting

I'm personally into the hard-house genre (which means that this song appeals to me :]).

That being said I already have a preset bias into giving this song a positive review; however, I'll be as constructive as possible.

The intro is good because it sets the foundation for what's coming up next, a deep rhythmic song which was made with the intent of making you feel like getting up and rocking out. The Saw sound used throughout the song definitely made this clear; however, if there's anything that I'd like to say it's that the high-pitched guitar that is used starting at 1:21 is overwhelming, i suggest lowering the volume slightly on that because it is the type of sound that is supposed to be used to compliment other sounds, not be presented up and center in the forefront.

Overall I think it's quite good though! Keep up the good work! :D

thewolfera responds:

Ah yes I've been having problem with that guitar. Thanks for making me do somethign about it haha

Aspect - Ice Cap Zone Aspect - Ice Cap Zone

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

Yes! My dream come true!

I loved this song too! It's definitely a classic!

Ahem, ok, personal emotions aside I feel that this is a fine rendition of the original. However, I suggest lowering the volume on the Arpeggio you set up starting at around 0:30. It isn't bad, in fact, it's essential to the song's structure; however, the fact that it's so overwhelming to the listener's ear might impact the overall feel you were going for in a negative fashion.

DESPITE THIS! It is still very solid and is definitely worth listening to! :D

thewolfera responds:

Thanks for the criticism!
I'll try out what you said

Aspect - Abyssal Sleep Aspect - Abyssal Sleep

Rated 4 / 5 stars

Very nice and fluid

Very nice remake, the sounds used are very well used because it keeps the same feel as the original. The repetition of course is blatantly obvious but that's understandable. Overall good job, I enjoyed it :]

If you have the time, check out my submissions as well. :]

Golden Axe - Wilderness (demo) Golden Axe - Wilderness (demo)

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

It's good until the last split second

It's good, I like it, but it doesn't flow well as a loop. By that I mean that at the end there's a split second of silence which really throws the loop function off. A loop is supposed to have a smooth transition when it repeats and this doesn't have that.

But once that's fixed It sounds like it'll be a pretty nice 15 second loop :]

(If you're using FL Studio when you're converting to .mp3 format there's an option to "wrap ending" that function was specifically designed for loops) Hope I helped! :D

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zRiffz responds:

Oh thanks, I'm gonna fix it right now. I was wondering why it was doing that. Thanks!

Edit: *Fixed*

_Summer Air _Summer Air

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

Very nice to relax to

When I listen to this I envision myself relaxing on a hammock on a small island in the middle of the sea... nestled between two tall palm trees that acknowledge my presence with gentle rustling, their greeting. All the while I breathe the sweet summer air, it's a strange smell... so sweet you can taste it... This air encompasses my every being, and unable to resist any longer I succumb to my fatigue, fading into a light slumber. A pleasing and refreshing rest.

Well my little fantasy aside I think this song is actually very nice, repetition aside it's very well done. Good job my friend :]

Ultra Bear Man (WIP)- Japillow Ultra Bear Man (WIP)- Japillow

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

Wow... I like it...

This is really well done (well, except for the volume issue, and the glitchy sound at around 0:19) other than that it seems like it could actually pass as is. It reminds me of some Megaman or Sonic oldschool 8-bit game.

Do you work with FL studio? If you do then may I ask to do a... remix..? This sounds like it would do really well in an orchestral type setting... If you'll allow me to, I'll try it out. I might not get to it until a week from now but I would definitely like to try it out. With your permission of course (and maybe the FL file?)

Japillow responds:

Thank you for the review! I made it in MilkyTracker so I'd have to remake it in FL to give the, just PM me later about the details.

_Lifetime _Lifetime

Rated 5 / 5 stars

Perfect Spy Song

Legitimately sounds like a spy theme, very mellow, very ambient, very chill. Easy to listen to, almost like a lullaby. Definitely downloaded, definitely 5/5, definitely fav'd. Good job, very nice.

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My Destination My Destination

Rated 5 / 5 stars

Totally Reminds Me of Gundam or Gurren Lagann

I swear, if i make an AMV I'm going to use this to accompany it. It's really well structured and in my mind it is completely over the top. It's still got the strings to accomany the song that can evoke strong emotions, at least it does for me. It's extremely good. Thanks for the inspiration :]

Pick Up The Phuuuuuuuuuu (mac) Pick Up The Phuuuuuuuuuu (mac)

Rated 5 / 5 stars

i rofled xD

Ok, i'm gnna be honest with ya xD if i had this as my ringtone I'd freaking let it ring the whole way through xD and then call back saying "yea, sry, jammin to my ringtone. what'd you wnna tell me?"

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